With reference to the above, at a minimum, "our" should have been capitalized as "Our" or, as an alternative, "[O]ur," if you intended to indicate a modified quote, rather than a mere grammatical correction. The comma after "[O]ur" is superfluous. Additionally, the word "hour" should have been in double quotes and the punctuation should have been placed within the second quotation mark. To whit: "Our" rhymes with "hour." Grammar-copping sucks unless it's perfect (which it seldom is ;-)).